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Writing Hard Science Fiction

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A reader posted a question in The Fix's forum about my last article.  He said, "I'm also curious about something you said about the market . . . that editors feel they're not seeing as much hard SF as they like, which was something I wouldn't have expected. Does that mean they're seeing a lot more soft SF than they can use? Or that the appetite for hard SF has expanded?"

Good questions.  I think that there is more "soft" SF than they can use.  The "they" in that sentence is mostly Asimov's and Analog.  I'm not sure whether Gordan Van Gelder wishes more hard science fiction crosses his desk.  I've heard observations from several editors that they get a lot of similar-looking, post-apocalyptic depressing stuff, for example.  I don't know if the market for hard SF has expanded, but they've said they're not seeing enough to fill the market as well as they would like.

The weird thing is that the "hard" science fiction story hardly ever has anything more than a paragraph or two that is particularly hard in it.  I mean, when is the last time you (or anyone else) read a story that was filled with equations or cutting edge science theory?  Hard science fiction is almost never explicitly more complex than the Sunday New York Times.  There might be a lot of hard science thinking behind the story, but not very much in the story.  If there is, the story is too boring for an editor to buy.  What readers want in the science is just enough of it to make the setting clear and to set up the plot.  Once that is established, the writer needs to get out of the way and put the science on the back burner.  Readers are more interested in the experience of or the effect of the science, not the explanation of it.

If that's the case, then, a careful writer who is not a scientist, but is willing to do the research, can write hard science fiction.  It's just that there aren't very many writers (it appears) who have both qualities.

I also think there's a lot of hand waving in science fiction stories that apes a legitimate "hard" science fiction.  Nanotechnology stories, for example, strike me this way, where nanotech becomes the new magic.  Everything is possible because nanotech makes it so.  There are also a lot of technobabble stories where the characters say things that sound scientific, like, "We'll be safe as soon as our string theory integers break down the DNA barriers in the boolian logic," but anyone who knows anything just laughs at this kind of stuff.

By the way, I don't want to sound like I'm belittling the effort and insight it takes to write hard science fiction.  Writing a SF story isn't just a matter of latching onto an interesting concept from a pop science book.  You have to be thinking about the impacts of technology, its repercussions, to do it well.  I think writing good science fiction takes a very, very particular (and maybe peculiar) mind set.  The writer's "what if" generator has to be fiendishly efficient.  To write a really good science fiction story, the writer has to strike a balance between the human story (which has to be interesting enough to keep us involved) and the SF idea, which has to be cool on its own level.  Sometimes the idea becomes even more interesting than the people, like Larry Niven's "Becalmed in Hell," although I liked the people in that story too.

Can you folks think of examples of "hard" science fiction that might supplement this discussion?  I really like Kim Stanley Robinson's Red Mars, which is just swimming in science knowledge, and I like the paragraph of hard science in James Patrick Kelly's "Think Like a Dinosaur."  What other stories or novels forefront the science?

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paulskemp
Jan. 17th, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
That was an enlightening article, Jim. I've never even considered deviating from fantasy into hard sci-fi, primarily because I thought the math/physics barriers to entry were too high. Perhaps not.

On another note:

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Another Zeppelin fan! Nice.
dsgood
Jan. 17th, 2008 09:20 pm (UTC)
How high the barriers are depends on what you mean by hard science fiction. If you mean the kind of stuff Hal Clement wrote, the barriers are high. If you mean the kind Heinlein wrote up through Starship Troopers, the barriers are much lower.

But if you mean "it's got spaceships in it, and if there are elves they're called something else," the barriers are probably lower than they are for writing good fantasy.
jimvanpelt
Jan. 17th, 2008 10:10 pm (UTC)
I think there are stories where the barrier is really high, but it's not visible. Ringworld is a good example of that. Although the theory of it is touched on in the story, Niven doesn't get into the math and physics. However, he did the math and physics to write the story. He knew how big it had to be; how much mass would be required to manufacture it, etc. For me, the most satisfying science in a science fiction story is the stuff that turns out to be true. However, as much as I appreciate the hard work, but I wouldn't let that stand in the way of a good story either. I know that FTL, for example, is considered by many physicists to be impossible, but many of my favorite stories are based on it. That may be that "low barrier" SF.
denni_schnapp
Jan. 17th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC)
One author who comes to mind is Peter Watts, in all his writing but particularly in his latest novel 'Blindsight'.

Hard SF is hard to do. I'm a biologist as well, but I'm struggling with the alien ecosystem in my WIP, and I'm certainly not above committing howlers. Prior knowledge makes us more timid, methinks!

(PS. It's almost impossible to log into LJ for commenting purposes. No idea why!)
jimvanpelt
Jan. 17th, 2008 10:11 pm (UTC)
I haven't read any Peter Watts. I'll have to give him a try.
gsemones
Jan. 17th, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC)
Reading this made me think of Larry Niven's Beowulf Schaeffer stories. Beowulf gets hired to check out a neutron star, or [insert other hard science setting/phenomenon]. They were usually a discovery story, but set in his milieu. The hard science defined the setting, or provided the mystery, etc.

Saying there's a need/desire among editors to see more hard SF, there ya go, getting me thinking again.... :-)
southernweirdo
Jan. 17th, 2008 09:26 pm (UTC)
Although most people don't really consider him a hard sci-fi author, Michael Crichton has always done a good job quantifying his speculations with factual information. His novel, "Prey," referenced some great journal articles about nanotechnology.

I think the explosion in the field of genetics owes a lot to the popularization of this field of science through his"Jurassic Park" books and movies.

As far as traditional sci fi authors go, I think Ben Bova's novels set in our galaxy are pretty good popcorn reads with a little hard science tossed in.
jimvanpelt
Jan. 17th, 2008 10:13 pm (UTC)
Chrichton is clearly a hard science fiction author. He's a mad man for the research. Andromeda Strain, for example, or The Terminal Man are chock full of information. Sometimes the information is the reason to read it!
matthewsrotundo
Jan. 18th, 2008 12:05 am (UTC)
See, I think Red Mars exemplifies all the reasons to avoid hard SF. To me, it reads more like a doctoral dissertation than a novel. Robinson clearly did a tremendous amount of research, and he seemed determined to shove every last bit of it into the book--at the expense of characterization and plot. Upon finishing it, I felt like I had been let out of prison.

What I'm sayin' here, I didn't much care for it.

Ringworld, on the other hand, is a good example of what I would call accurate SF, which is what I strive for in my own work. I once wrote a story that involved spaceflight at relativistic speeds. And yeah, I actually worked out the (somewhat simplified) math. But I didn't see the need to show the reader my calculations.
jimvanpelt
Jan. 18th, 2008 12:11 am (UTC)
I think one of the reasons I liked SF so much when I was young was that I was learning about stuff during the journey. That idea still works its way into my fiction. If NOTHING else in the story is working, at least I ought to learn something. Information all by itself, if it is interesting enough, makes reading worthwhile. It's sort of like the whaling chapters in Moby Dick.

This is very much a YMMV issue, though, and information can come at you in good ways or bad ones.
matthewsrotundo
Jan. 18th, 2008 03:52 am (UTC)
Yeah, I hated the whaling chapters in Moby Dick, too. :-)

I think Arthur C. Clarke is among the best at making infodump entertaining.
chipmunk_planet
Jan. 18th, 2008 12:29 am (UTC)
Dragon's Egg by Robert L. Forward is my favorite hard SF book. I think the cheela were more interesting than the people, actually. :)
david_de_beer
Jan. 18th, 2008 08:16 am (UTC)
I seem to recall GVG (or maybe JJA?) last year commenting that they get mostly fantasy, and wouldn't mind seeing more SF.

Hard SF vs soft SF - yeah, I don't know. Don't really care, so long as there is a story and it doesn't drive me nuts with being a "cool gimmick" story only. And so long as the interior logic of the narrative makes sense.
Then I'm happy. Won't necessarily remember it, unless it really speaks to me, but I won't be upset with the writer if I'm not inundated with a sense of incredulity as to why anything is happening.
webcatcher.blogspot.com
Jan. 18th, 2008 09:08 am (UTC)
Do you read Stephen Baxter?

I would rate some of his books as hard science fiction.
Two of my favorite ones are:
1)Exultant
2)Evolution

The books are completely different from each other. The first one is a battle being fought in the galaxy. The second one is about evolution on earth starting from the period of dinosaurs. Some people might find it more of a textbook than a novel, but I found the reading quite enjoyable.


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